Outside Speaker Critique Essay Rubric

Taweh 2 6/5/2015 Outside Speaker Critique An introduction has several key aspects in order for it to be successful. One needs can use a strong opening statement, an attention-grabbing device, or be able to establish credibility to their audience in order to gain their trust as listeners. Cuddy starts with a life hack of making the audience change your posture. This change in posture she states make you feel down on yourself, and therefore can change your mood. Being able to understand body language opens the entire premise to the speech. The life hack Cuddy used is an attention-grabbing device because she is getting the audience involved. Amy Cuddy establishes credibility by using the research she is found with the funny pictures used in her presentation and stating that she is a “social psychologist,” and that she attended Harvard. I consider Cuddy’s introduction to her speech somewhat successful. She gets the audience involved immediately and keeps them laughing as she introduces her points. Cuddy’s audience analysis demonstrates an audience that primarily is not well informed in the area of body language, so she tries to break down the aspects in an entertaining way in order to keep the attention. This is successful, like the President Obama video, but as I watched the video I had a hard time following her points because she tended to bounce around in my opinion.

Why study other speakers?

Studying and evaluating the techniques of other speakers is an excellent way to become a better public speaker.

  • When a speaker impresses, ask “Why was that impressive?
  • When a speaker bombs, ask “Why didn’t that hit the mark?

Analyzing other speakers provides an abundant supply of ideas that can be incorporated into our own presentations.

Why use video critiques?

With a growing supply of speech videos readily accessible, video critiques can be especially useful teaching and learning aids.

  • Without video, you can say: “Remember that keynote speaker last week? Weren’t her gestures powerful?
  • With video, you can refer directly to precise moments: “The keynote speaker last week was fantastic. Her gestures at 1:27 and 2:38 of her speech were powerful.

Speech Critique Examples on Six Minutes

Speaker
Suki Kim
Title
This is what it's like to teach in North Korea
Venue
TED 2015
Notable Elements
Powerful and emotional memoir-based talk; outstanding vocal variety and expressiveness.
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Speaker
Franklin Delano Roosevelt
Title
"A date which will live in infamy" (Pearl Harbor address)
Venue
December 8, 1941, United States Presidential Address to Congress
Notable Elements
Address to Congress on the day following the Pearl Harbor attack. Speech analysis focuses on strategic word selection.
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Speaker
Winston Churchill
Title
The Sinews of Peace (Iron Curtain)
Venue
March 5, 1946, at Westminster College in Fulton, Missouri
Notable Elements
Memorable speech which signalled the start of the Cold War. Analysis shows how to demonstrate charisma tactics through speech writing.
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Speaker
Ken Robinson
Title
Do schools kill creativity?
Venue
TED 2006
Notable Elements
Deep ideas; engaging; humorous; use of signalling words and rhetorical questions.
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Speaker
Dan Pink
Title
The Surprising Science of Motivation
Venue
TED 2009
Notable Elements
Strong opening and closing; masterful speechwriting; passionate; superb gestures and vocal variety.
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Speaker
Abraham Lincoln
Title
Gettysburg Address
Venue
Dedication of the Soldiers' National Cemetary in Gettysburg, Pennsylvania, on November 19, 1863, in the midst of the United States Civil War.
Notable Elements
One of the most famous, most quoted, and most recited speeches of all time. It is also one of the shortest at just 10 sentences.
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Speaker
Elizabeth Gilbert
Title
Nurturing Creativity
Venue
TED 2009
Notable Elements
Passionate; storytelling; engaging the audience; speaking rate; hand gestures; relating the message to the audience.
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Speaker
Jacqueline Novogratz
Title
Escaping Poverty
Venue
TED 2009
Notable Elements
Strong opening and closing; relates to the audience; storytelling; contrast; visuals; eye contact.
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Speaker
Barack Obama
Title
Presidential Inaugural Address
Venue
Washington, D.C., January 20, 2009
Notable Elements
Inauguration speech delivered to a live crowd estimated at 2 million people and billions around the globe.
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Speaker
Martin Luther King Jr.
Title
I Have a Dream
Venue
March on Washington for Jobs and Freedom, from the steps of the Lincoln Memorial, August 28, 1963
Notable Elements
Given to a crowd of 250,000, "I Have a Dream" is considered one of the greatest speeches of all time.
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Speaker
Dalton Sherman
Title
Do you believe?
Venue
Dallas Independent School District Teachers Conference
Notable Elements
10-year-old 5th grader Dalton Sherman delivers an inspirational speech to 20,000 teachers about the importance of believing in each other.
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Speaker
Randy Pausch
Title
The Last Lecture (Really Achieving Your Childhood Dreams)
Venue
CMU (Carnegie Mellon University)
Notable Elements
Tremendously inspirational, funny, clever use of props and visual aids, a truly memorable speech.
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Speaker
Patrick Henry Winston
Title
How to Speak
Venue
MIT Annual Lecture (1997)
Notable Elements
Dozens of practical public speaking tips; targets speaking to teach or to inform; lecture-style.
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Speaker
Majora Carter
Title
Greening the Ghetto
Venue
TED 2006
Notable Elements
Personal emotion, energy, passion, rapid speaking rate, call-to-action, reading from script.
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Speaker
Hans Rosling
Title
Debunking third-world myths with the best stats you've ever seen
Venue
TED 2006
Notable Elements
Six simple techniques for presenting data, graphical display, energetic delivery.
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Speaker
J.A. Gamache
Title
Being a Mr. G.
Venue
2007 Toastmasters (Region VI) Speech Contest
Notable Elements
Strong writing, powerful body language, speech opening and closing which feature the same prop, callback technique for repetitive humor, emotionally charged writing, and a series of wonderfully choreographed gestures.
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Speaker
Steve Jobs
Title
Stay Hungry. Stay Foolish.
Venue
Stanford University Commencement Address 2005
Notable Elements
Strong opening; simple classical structure; the Rule of Three; rich figures of speech; and a recurring theme of birth/death/rebirth.
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Speaker
Al Gore
Title
15 ways to avert a climate crisis
Venue
TED 2006
Notable Elements
Humor; call-to-action; audience awareness; and slide techniques.
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Speaker
Dick Hardt
Title
Identity 2.0
Venue
OSCON 2005
Notable Elements
Lessig method, speech opening, humor, repetition, contrast, analogies.
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